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>When I read it I felt like the author wanted to givesome sort of lesson and then didn't know how to finish the damn thing.
If you are familiar with Seto Yuki's works, you notice the story is less about giving a message but about normalizing horny and taking women from the pedestal that males put them. Most of his stories feature males that took too much time to kickstart a relationship while the girl was actively engaging in sex one way or the other. That's the pattern really. The clash of Chitose getting off from a dude that she doesn't love isn't even the first time this was done. He has done so before with adult characters in Triangle Cafe featured in Accelerando. There a dude had a crush with a girl since high school but he never had the courage. The girl very much loves him but in the meantime she engages in having sex with the friend they have in common. What's more the friend helps him fuck her eventually.

Sure the story isn't the full fledged premise he might have wanted to put in the VN project but it is still about dealing with the side effects of not taking a first step early enough regardless of the conclusion. But people can't make peace with this one in particular because of many factors beside the ending, it is actually relatable to a degree. The old thread had people sharing their own similar experiences so it is easy to project somehow for some individuals.

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