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Is this an actual published comic? That dialogue doesn't feel professional. I'll try to polish it a bit, as a writing exercise.

>"We're here! The Jenny Rose cafe. The "Heart""
>"Oh thank god, I didn't want to start processing everything that just happened. What the hell was all that anyway? What I really want now is a minute to think."
>"I'm gonna give you that and anything else you ever want, you know that?"

I removed her calling her her whole name, since it felt odd to me, but I'm not sure. Maybe it's a character quirk we would need more context for.

>"Promise?"
>"On my moms, forever."

This is already as short as it can be.

>"Well Mags, how about one more time at the giant heart? We can pretend we're in baby boxing class again."
>"Yeah! I'll even let you carry me up there. I fought you about it back then, but the truth is, I always loved it."

>"I'm so in awe of both of them. If this is what it's like to date other women, then I applaud all the women that do, because this is incredible. Motorcycle courtship chase? Check. Missiles and explosions? Yup."
>""We're just flying together in the sky, heading to a giant heart..." (sigh) If they come back married, I'm going to be so jealous. Always the bride's best archer, never the archer bride."

This is the best I can do, I think. Feel free to correct, critique, or take your own crack at it. I'm not a native english speaker, so it's quite possible I have missed something.

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